Essay
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Could you please to proofread and edit my personal statement essay. Thanks
My name is Mongontsetseg. I was born 1987.I am quit short and well-built. I live in UB because came to laern in university of Information and Communiction Technology. There are seven of us in our family;my father is Sedsuren aged fifty five,my mother is Zagas younger sister is Urantsetseg aged nineteen. I have two brother. His name is Bold and Boldbaatar. They are 25 and 30years old. The person I admire most is my mom. She is kind and loving, responsible and hardworking. My mom is my role model and she has played an important role in my life. Some nights before bed, my mother would talk to me about her past, stories encourage me to try new things and work hard. My family live in Arkhangai Erdenemandal country side. My younger sister study school of ‘Teacher college’ .I was born and raised in the beautiful country of Mongolian, which is located in the Central Asia. I finished High School there and attended ten-year. This is my third semester here. Now I feel more confident about myself, because I passed all courses that I have been taking and received good grades and try to do my best to keep doing it.
I'm a very honest and friendly person. In addition I like science, arts and music, especially classical music and I love to read very much. My favourite music is pop. My favourite group is Kamerton. I can dancing and playing basketball very well. I enjoy reading interesting books, watching action movies, hanging out with my friends. I like to play on piano, to play big tennis and go to the gym. Unfortunately, I don't have much time to hanging out with my friends now, because I sacrificed my free time to learn. But it worth it in order to be proud of myself in the future and achieve my goal. I really like this school and the I have chosen this school among the others. I'm trying to do my best to study hard and to make good grades, because education is very important to me. My personality is one of my best assests. I'am funny, outgoing and genuinly care about other people. The thing I dislike I have a hard time expressing my emotions, or letting people in on what is bothering me because I assume that gives them the power to hurt me. And I don't like for anyone to see me cry. I hold back a lot and I don't like that about me. I love to read Novels, one of my best novels is The Kite Runner and Remember me. I am a people person. I don't normally like being alone. I think more than any other era in which humankind has ever lived, this age requires efficiency. According to this recent tendency is going to be harder and bigger, and with the advent of this new life style, only computer has been thought to be the alternative to achieve break through this time. I have some positive perspective on this stream, and in this essay, I will describe my own thinking with my personal regards and impersonal common senses. First of all, if it were not for computer, people in the era of multiplying information would be inundated by urging information, what is worse is that to facilitate efficiency in every respects of work, we need more information. Actually, the cutting edge technology in computer science have ameliorated efficiency, which has been converted to shrinking time spent for work and enlarging people’s free time. Not only efficiency, it has also augmented the approach for information. Sad to say, the inequality of approach to knowledge was the one of biggest main culprit that fortified the gap between the poor and the rich. Thanks to the advent of the internet, even the poor become to traverse the world of words. In the future, someone who wants to train themselves and fulfill their dream would not need to relinquish any longer because they would become to have the way to endeavor regardless of their monetary circumstances. Scanting the distances between person and person, class and class, the computer science will finally provide all of us with how to contend with the wall among humankind, which is the best expected way to use computer in the future. So I found myself flying into the other world. o I found myself flying into the other world.
Monday, November 30, 2009
Sunday, November 29, 2009
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Abstract-Telecommunication
TNS is of five departments within Information Technology Services (ITS), and is responsible for providing a wide range of voice, video and network services ad the communications infrastructure necessary to support these services.TNS primary purpose is to provide these services in a reliable way with a level of quality that meets or exceeds our customers expectations. TNS is organized into 5 functional work groups providing the following services and functions:
• voice services
• network services
• video services
• infrastructure services
• business services
TNS is staffed by approximately 40 full-time technical and 10 part-time students. TNS is responsible for and maintains our capital funding. These capital funds are used for capital-equipment refresh (funds for upgrading capital equipment after its useful depreciated life) , to purchase new capital equipment for existing or new services, and to fund other capital projects requiring depreciable equipment.TNS continues to receive requests from cellular carriers for access the campus to place antennas and equipment to reduce density and increase coverage. The carriers are interested in base station locations and in-building distribution systems. TNS in conjunction with the campus security office will investigate other approaches to providing network intrusion detection and prevention on campus as a next step in the evolution of the existing campus system.TNS goal is to have wireless service defined and network installed/ upgraded by the fall semester.TNS will apply a 4-step plan for getting from current service to a better defined and supported campus-wide service by:
• Establishing a wireless service advisory group representing faculty, students, staff and technologists
• Obtaining end-user input that can be translated into requirements for a wireless service and service description
• Obtaining executive sponsorship necessary for legitimacy and support of the service at upper levels of the University administration
• Developing the implementation and deployment strategy
TNS mission of the Telecommunication and Network Services (TNS) Department is to effectively deliver quality communication services to our customers and fulfill our stewardship role for institutional communication resources.
TNS is of five departments within Information Technology Services (ITS), and is responsible for providing a wide range of voice, video and network services ad the communications infrastructure necessary to support these services.TNS primary purpose is to provide these services in a reliable way with a level of quality that meets or exceeds our customers expectations. TNS is organized into 5 functional work groups providing the following services and functions:
• voice services
• network services
• video services
• infrastructure services
• business services
TNS is staffed by approximately 40 full-time technical and 10 part-time students. TNS is responsible for and maintains our capital funding. These capital funds are used for capital-equipment refresh (funds for upgrading capital equipment after its useful depreciated life) , to purchase new capital equipment for existing or new services, and to fund other capital projects requiring depreciable equipment.TNS continues to receive requests from cellular carriers for access the campus to place antennas and equipment to reduce density and increase coverage. The carriers are interested in base station locations and in-building distribution systems. TNS in conjunction with the campus security office will investigate other approaches to providing network intrusion detection and prevention on campus as a next step in the evolution of the existing campus system.TNS goal is to have wireless service defined and network installed/ upgraded by the fall semester.TNS will apply a 4-step plan for getting from current service to a better defined and supported campus-wide service by:
• Establishing a wireless service advisory group representing faculty, students, staff and technologists
• Obtaining end-user input that can be translated into requirements for a wireless service and service description
• Obtaining executive sponsorship necessary for legitimacy and support of the service at upper levels of the University administration
• Developing the implementation and deployment strategy
TNS mission of the Telecommunication and Network Services (TNS) Department is to effectively deliver quality communication services to our customers and fulfill our stewardship role for institutional communication resources.
hi bagshaa
Entry Test 9
What’s in a name
(Bring, art, theme, enforce, progress, awake, rebel, religion, translate, literature)
Despite her strict, very orthodox 16.Brought Eliot matured into a writer who proved herself to be far ahead of her times, both 17.Artfully and in her personal life. The ideas reflected 18.By theme in her novels pertaining to the role of women in society shocked many, even those who were seen as enlightened. Growing up, Eliot lived a culturally starved existence. At an early age she fell under the dubious tutelage of the very pious Rev John Jones, who 19.Enforced the staunch beliefs that had been instilled in her from birth. Eliot’s relationship with the 20.Progressing intellectuals, Charles and Caroline Bray, resulted in her 21.Awaken and caused her to distance herself from the narrow ideas which she had held up to that point. This intellectual 22.Rebel is opened a wide rift between herself and her 23.Religious devout father. Under the patronage of the Bray couple, Eliot had the opportunity to compile a 24.Translated ‘of life of Jesus’ by Strauss. This commissioned work was to be the only 25.literatural piece that would ever appear bearing Eliot’s real name.
Entry Test 7
Debunking the Cold War (12-1, 12-2)
38-E, 39-A, 40-C, 41-D, 42-B, 43-G, 44-H
38. One is standing in a manmade reminder of what hate, panic and doomsayers premonitions can persuade a people to do.
E. One would be hard pressed to work up any enthusiasm to visit what would appear to be just another museum. They would be surprised at what was secreted away behind, and hinted at, by the aforementioned self-effacing plaque
39. What is less well documented is that Canadians, too, were infected with this contagious, all-enveloping panic induced by the Great Red bear and its supposed arsenal of weapons of annihilation.
A. The late President Kennedy’s address to the American people was broadcast live into almost every living room in the US.
40. Two of the best engineers Canada had ever produced had been put under contract in case of emergency. From this highly advanced studio, messages would de sent out to the besieged Canadian public in the aftermath of a nuclear attack
D. The bunkers namesake John Diefenbaker, who was then acting Prime Minister, ordered the construction begun in 1959.Two years later.
41. Canadian system from their safe haven, the prime minister and other government dignitaries could advice Canadian survivors, on the means for gathering their scattered wits about them, getting back on their feed and beginning the necessary task of reconstructing the country
G. Soviet bombs began to fall. This reputedly invincible ‘hole in the ground’ was built to shelter government and military higher-ups. Throughout the inevitable Soviet barrage these privileged VIPs would be saved from the missiles themselves, while afterwards.
42. The governments proverbial skeleton in the closet was revealed when a disgruntled lower-echelon member of the military leaked information of its existence to the press.
B. Toronto is Canada’s capital, the honour actually belongs to Ottawa. This northern city has a population of approximately one million people.
43. Perhaps the Canadian people instead of frothing at the mouth in anger over their governments perceived misbehavior, would have better spent their time counting their lucky stars that the fortitude and indestructibility of the Diefenbunker had never needed to be put to the test. The sky is falling mentality of both the American and Canadian governments changed dramatically with the dissolution of the Soviet Union in1989.
F. The collective voice on the street shouted: why had they as a people. Not been warned of the great threat posed by the Soviets? Why had safeguards not been put in place to ensure the safety of the average Canadian?
44. The Diefenbunker, which was once regarded as an asylum by the chosen few and an act of government betrayal by the multitudes, is now only a historical landmark visited by history buffs and off-the-beaten-track tourists. Physically, this concrete monstrosity serves as both museum and display case for war memorabilia.
H. As the result of the end of the Cold War, the accompanying fear and panic it had conjured up in Canada gradually dissipated. Over the next few decades though relations between the US and Cuba remained strained. Canada began trading with his communist country.
What’s in a name
(Bring, art, theme, enforce, progress, awake, rebel, religion, translate, literature)
Despite her strict, very orthodox 16.Brought Eliot matured into a writer who proved herself to be far ahead of her times, both 17.Artfully and in her personal life. The ideas reflected 18.By theme in her novels pertaining to the role of women in society shocked many, even those who were seen as enlightened. Growing up, Eliot lived a culturally starved existence. At an early age she fell under the dubious tutelage of the very pious Rev John Jones, who 19.Enforced the staunch beliefs that had been instilled in her from birth. Eliot’s relationship with the 20.Progressing intellectuals, Charles and Caroline Bray, resulted in her 21.Awaken and caused her to distance herself from the narrow ideas which she had held up to that point. This intellectual 22.Rebel is opened a wide rift between herself and her 23.Religious devout father. Under the patronage of the Bray couple, Eliot had the opportunity to compile a 24.Translated ‘of life of Jesus’ by Strauss. This commissioned work was to be the only 25.literatural piece that would ever appear bearing Eliot’s real name.
Entry Test 7
Debunking the Cold War (12-1, 12-2)
38-E, 39-A, 40-C, 41-D, 42-B, 43-G, 44-H
38. One is standing in a manmade reminder of what hate, panic and doomsayers premonitions can persuade a people to do.
E. One would be hard pressed to work up any enthusiasm to visit what would appear to be just another museum. They would be surprised at what was secreted away behind, and hinted at, by the aforementioned self-effacing plaque
39. What is less well documented is that Canadians, too, were infected with this contagious, all-enveloping panic induced by the Great Red bear and its supposed arsenal of weapons of annihilation.
A. The late President Kennedy’s address to the American people was broadcast live into almost every living room in the US.
40. Two of the best engineers Canada had ever produced had been put under contract in case of emergency. From this highly advanced studio, messages would de sent out to the besieged Canadian public in the aftermath of a nuclear attack
D. The bunkers namesake John Diefenbaker, who was then acting Prime Minister, ordered the construction begun in 1959.Two years later.
41. Canadian system from their safe haven, the prime minister and other government dignitaries could advice Canadian survivors, on the means for gathering their scattered wits about them, getting back on their feed and beginning the necessary task of reconstructing the country
G. Soviet bombs began to fall. This reputedly invincible ‘hole in the ground’ was built to shelter government and military higher-ups. Throughout the inevitable Soviet barrage these privileged VIPs would be saved from the missiles themselves, while afterwards.
42. The governments proverbial skeleton in the closet was revealed when a disgruntled lower-echelon member of the military leaked information of its existence to the press.
B. Toronto is Canada’s capital, the honour actually belongs to Ottawa. This northern city has a population of approximately one million people.
43. Perhaps the Canadian people instead of frothing at the mouth in anger over their governments perceived misbehavior, would have better spent their time counting their lucky stars that the fortitude and indestructibility of the Diefenbunker had never needed to be put to the test. The sky is falling mentality of both the American and Canadian governments changed dramatically with the dissolution of the Soviet Union in1989.
F. The collective voice on the street shouted: why had they as a people. Not been warned of the great threat posed by the Soviets? Why had safeguards not been put in place to ensure the safety of the average Canadian?
44. The Diefenbunker, which was once regarded as an asylum by the chosen few and an act of government betrayal by the multitudes, is now only a historical landmark visited by history buffs and off-the-beaten-track tourists. Physically, this concrete monstrosity serves as both museum and display case for war memorabilia.
H. As the result of the end of the Cold War, the accompanying fear and panic it had conjured up in Canada gradually dissipated. Over the next few decades though relations between the US and Cuba remained strained. Canada began trading with his communist country.
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