Essay
Hello,
Could you please to proofread and edit my personal statement essay. Thanks
My name is Mongontsetseg. I was born 1987.I am quit short and well-built. I live in UB because came to laern in university of Information and Communiction Technology. There are seven of us in our family;my father is Sedsuren aged fifty five,my mother is Zagas younger sister is Urantsetseg aged nineteen. I have two brother. His name is Bold and Boldbaatar. They are 25 and 30years old. The person I admire most is my mom. She is kind and loving, responsible and hardworking. My mom is my role model and she has played an important role in my life. Some nights before bed, my mother would talk to me about her past, stories encourage me to try new things and work hard. My family live in Arkhangai Erdenemandal country side. My younger sister study school of ‘Teacher college’ .I was born and raised in the beautiful country of Mongolian, which is located in the Central Asia. I finished High School there and attended ten-year. This is my third semester here. Now I feel more confident about myself, because I passed all courses that I have been taking and received good grades and try to do my best to keep doing it.
I'm a very honest and friendly person. In addition I like science, arts and music, especially classical music and I love to read very much. My favourite music is pop. My favourite group is Kamerton. I can dancing and playing basketball very well. I enjoy reading interesting books, watching action movies, hanging out with my friends. I like to play on piano, to play big tennis and go to the gym. Unfortunately, I don't have much time to hanging out with my friends now, because I sacrificed my free time to learn. But it worth it in order to be proud of myself in the future and achieve my goal. I really like this school and the I have chosen this school among the others. I'm trying to do my best to study hard and to make good grades, because education is very important to me. My personality is one of my best assests. I'am funny, outgoing and genuinly care about other people. The thing I dislike I have a hard time expressing my emotions, or letting people in on what is bothering me because I assume that gives them the power to hurt me. And I don't like for anyone to see me cry. I hold back a lot and I don't like that about me. I love to read Novels, one of my best novels is The Kite Runner and Remember me. I am a people person. I don't normally like being alone. I think more than any other era in which humankind has ever lived, this age requires efficiency. According to this recent tendency is going to be harder and bigger, and with the advent of this new life style, only computer has been thought to be the alternative to achieve break through this time. I have some positive perspective on this stream, and in this essay, I will describe my own thinking with my personal regards and impersonal common senses. First of all, if it were not for computer, people in the era of multiplying information would be inundated by urging information, what is worse is that to facilitate efficiency in every respects of work, we need more information. Actually, the cutting edge technology in computer science have ameliorated efficiency, which has been converted to shrinking time spent for work and enlarging people’s free time. Not only efficiency, it has also augmented the approach for information. Sad to say, the inequality of approach to knowledge was the one of biggest main culprit that fortified the gap between the poor and the rich. Thanks to the advent of the internet, even the poor become to traverse the world of words. In the future, someone who wants to train themselves and fulfill their dream would not need to relinquish any longer because they would become to have the way to endeavor regardless of their monetary circumstances. Scanting the distances between person and person, class and class, the computer science will finally provide all of us with how to contend with the wall among humankind, which is the best expected way to use computer in the future. So I found myself flying into the other world. o I found myself flying into the other world.
Monday, November 30, 2009
Sunday, November 29, 2009
hi
Abstract-Telecommunication
TNS is of five departments within Information Technology Services (ITS), and is responsible for providing a wide range of voice, video and network services ad the communications infrastructure necessary to support these services.TNS primary purpose is to provide these services in a reliable way with a level of quality that meets or exceeds our customers expectations. TNS is organized into 5 functional work groups providing the following services and functions:
• voice services
• network services
• video services
• infrastructure services
• business services
TNS is staffed by approximately 40 full-time technical and 10 part-time students. TNS is responsible for and maintains our capital funding. These capital funds are used for capital-equipment refresh (funds for upgrading capital equipment after its useful depreciated life) , to purchase new capital equipment for existing or new services, and to fund other capital projects requiring depreciable equipment.TNS continues to receive requests from cellular carriers for access the campus to place antennas and equipment to reduce density and increase coverage. The carriers are interested in base station locations and in-building distribution systems. TNS in conjunction with the campus security office will investigate other approaches to providing network intrusion detection and prevention on campus as a next step in the evolution of the existing campus system.TNS goal is to have wireless service defined and network installed/ upgraded by the fall semester.TNS will apply a 4-step plan for getting from current service to a better defined and supported campus-wide service by:
• Establishing a wireless service advisory group representing faculty, students, staff and technologists
• Obtaining end-user input that can be translated into requirements for a wireless service and service description
• Obtaining executive sponsorship necessary for legitimacy and support of the service at upper levels of the University administration
• Developing the implementation and deployment strategy
TNS mission of the Telecommunication and Network Services (TNS) Department is to effectively deliver quality communication services to our customers and fulfill our stewardship role for institutional communication resources.
TNS is of five departments within Information Technology Services (ITS), and is responsible for providing a wide range of voice, video and network services ad the communications infrastructure necessary to support these services.TNS primary purpose is to provide these services in a reliable way with a level of quality that meets or exceeds our customers expectations. TNS is organized into 5 functional work groups providing the following services and functions:
• voice services
• network services
• video services
• infrastructure services
• business services
TNS is staffed by approximately 40 full-time technical and 10 part-time students. TNS is responsible for and maintains our capital funding. These capital funds are used for capital-equipment refresh (funds for upgrading capital equipment after its useful depreciated life) , to purchase new capital equipment for existing or new services, and to fund other capital projects requiring depreciable equipment.TNS continues to receive requests from cellular carriers for access the campus to place antennas and equipment to reduce density and increase coverage. The carriers are interested in base station locations and in-building distribution systems. TNS in conjunction with the campus security office will investigate other approaches to providing network intrusion detection and prevention on campus as a next step in the evolution of the existing campus system.TNS goal is to have wireless service defined and network installed/ upgraded by the fall semester.TNS will apply a 4-step plan for getting from current service to a better defined and supported campus-wide service by:
• Establishing a wireless service advisory group representing faculty, students, staff and technologists
• Obtaining end-user input that can be translated into requirements for a wireless service and service description
• Obtaining executive sponsorship necessary for legitimacy and support of the service at upper levels of the University administration
• Developing the implementation and deployment strategy
TNS mission of the Telecommunication and Network Services (TNS) Department is to effectively deliver quality communication services to our customers and fulfill our stewardship role for institutional communication resources.
hi bagshaa
Entry Test 9
What’s in a name
(Bring, art, theme, enforce, progress, awake, rebel, religion, translate, literature)
Despite her strict, very orthodox 16.Brought Eliot matured into a writer who proved herself to be far ahead of her times, both 17.Artfully and in her personal life. The ideas reflected 18.By theme in her novels pertaining to the role of women in society shocked many, even those who were seen as enlightened. Growing up, Eliot lived a culturally starved existence. At an early age she fell under the dubious tutelage of the very pious Rev John Jones, who 19.Enforced the staunch beliefs that had been instilled in her from birth. Eliot’s relationship with the 20.Progressing intellectuals, Charles and Caroline Bray, resulted in her 21.Awaken and caused her to distance herself from the narrow ideas which she had held up to that point. This intellectual 22.Rebel is opened a wide rift between herself and her 23.Religious devout father. Under the patronage of the Bray couple, Eliot had the opportunity to compile a 24.Translated ‘of life of Jesus’ by Strauss. This commissioned work was to be the only 25.literatural piece that would ever appear bearing Eliot’s real name.
Entry Test 7
Debunking the Cold War (12-1, 12-2)
38-E, 39-A, 40-C, 41-D, 42-B, 43-G, 44-H
38. One is standing in a manmade reminder of what hate, panic and doomsayers premonitions can persuade a people to do.
E. One would be hard pressed to work up any enthusiasm to visit what would appear to be just another museum. They would be surprised at what was secreted away behind, and hinted at, by the aforementioned self-effacing plaque
39. What is less well documented is that Canadians, too, were infected with this contagious, all-enveloping panic induced by the Great Red bear and its supposed arsenal of weapons of annihilation.
A. The late President Kennedy’s address to the American people was broadcast live into almost every living room in the US.
40. Two of the best engineers Canada had ever produced had been put under contract in case of emergency. From this highly advanced studio, messages would de sent out to the besieged Canadian public in the aftermath of a nuclear attack
D. The bunkers namesake John Diefenbaker, who was then acting Prime Minister, ordered the construction begun in 1959.Two years later.
41. Canadian system from their safe haven, the prime minister and other government dignitaries could advice Canadian survivors, on the means for gathering their scattered wits about them, getting back on their feed and beginning the necessary task of reconstructing the country
G. Soviet bombs began to fall. This reputedly invincible ‘hole in the ground’ was built to shelter government and military higher-ups. Throughout the inevitable Soviet barrage these privileged VIPs would be saved from the missiles themselves, while afterwards.
42. The governments proverbial skeleton in the closet was revealed when a disgruntled lower-echelon member of the military leaked information of its existence to the press.
B. Toronto is Canada’s capital, the honour actually belongs to Ottawa. This northern city has a population of approximately one million people.
43. Perhaps the Canadian people instead of frothing at the mouth in anger over their governments perceived misbehavior, would have better spent their time counting their lucky stars that the fortitude and indestructibility of the Diefenbunker had never needed to be put to the test. The sky is falling mentality of both the American and Canadian governments changed dramatically with the dissolution of the Soviet Union in1989.
F. The collective voice on the street shouted: why had they as a people. Not been warned of the great threat posed by the Soviets? Why had safeguards not been put in place to ensure the safety of the average Canadian?
44. The Diefenbunker, which was once regarded as an asylum by the chosen few and an act of government betrayal by the multitudes, is now only a historical landmark visited by history buffs and off-the-beaten-track tourists. Physically, this concrete monstrosity serves as both museum and display case for war memorabilia.
H. As the result of the end of the Cold War, the accompanying fear and panic it had conjured up in Canada gradually dissipated. Over the next few decades though relations between the US and Cuba remained strained. Canada began trading with his communist country.
What’s in a name
(Bring, art, theme, enforce, progress, awake, rebel, religion, translate, literature)
Despite her strict, very orthodox 16.Brought Eliot matured into a writer who proved herself to be far ahead of her times, both 17.Artfully and in her personal life. The ideas reflected 18.By theme in her novels pertaining to the role of women in society shocked many, even those who were seen as enlightened. Growing up, Eliot lived a culturally starved existence. At an early age she fell under the dubious tutelage of the very pious Rev John Jones, who 19.Enforced the staunch beliefs that had been instilled in her from birth. Eliot’s relationship with the 20.Progressing intellectuals, Charles and Caroline Bray, resulted in her 21.Awaken and caused her to distance herself from the narrow ideas which she had held up to that point. This intellectual 22.Rebel is opened a wide rift between herself and her 23.Religious devout father. Under the patronage of the Bray couple, Eliot had the opportunity to compile a 24.Translated ‘of life of Jesus’ by Strauss. This commissioned work was to be the only 25.literatural piece that would ever appear bearing Eliot’s real name.
Entry Test 7
Debunking the Cold War (12-1, 12-2)
38-E, 39-A, 40-C, 41-D, 42-B, 43-G, 44-H
38. One is standing in a manmade reminder of what hate, panic and doomsayers premonitions can persuade a people to do.
E. One would be hard pressed to work up any enthusiasm to visit what would appear to be just another museum. They would be surprised at what was secreted away behind, and hinted at, by the aforementioned self-effacing plaque
39. What is less well documented is that Canadians, too, were infected with this contagious, all-enveloping panic induced by the Great Red bear and its supposed arsenal of weapons of annihilation.
A. The late President Kennedy’s address to the American people was broadcast live into almost every living room in the US.
40. Two of the best engineers Canada had ever produced had been put under contract in case of emergency. From this highly advanced studio, messages would de sent out to the besieged Canadian public in the aftermath of a nuclear attack
D. The bunkers namesake John Diefenbaker, who was then acting Prime Minister, ordered the construction begun in 1959.Two years later.
41. Canadian system from their safe haven, the prime minister and other government dignitaries could advice Canadian survivors, on the means for gathering their scattered wits about them, getting back on their feed and beginning the necessary task of reconstructing the country
G. Soviet bombs began to fall. This reputedly invincible ‘hole in the ground’ was built to shelter government and military higher-ups. Throughout the inevitable Soviet barrage these privileged VIPs would be saved from the missiles themselves, while afterwards.
42. The governments proverbial skeleton in the closet was revealed when a disgruntled lower-echelon member of the military leaked information of its existence to the press.
B. Toronto is Canada’s capital, the honour actually belongs to Ottawa. This northern city has a population of approximately one million people.
43. Perhaps the Canadian people instead of frothing at the mouth in anger over their governments perceived misbehavior, would have better spent their time counting their lucky stars that the fortitude and indestructibility of the Diefenbunker had never needed to be put to the test. The sky is falling mentality of both the American and Canadian governments changed dramatically with the dissolution of the Soviet Union in1989.
F. The collective voice on the street shouted: why had they as a people. Not been warned of the great threat posed by the Soviets? Why had safeguards not been put in place to ensure the safety of the average Canadian?
44. The Diefenbunker, which was once regarded as an asylum by the chosen few and an act of government betrayal by the multitudes, is now only a historical landmark visited by history buffs and off-the-beaten-track tourists. Physically, this concrete monstrosity serves as both museum and display case for war memorabilia.
H. As the result of the end of the Cold War, the accompanying fear and panic it had conjured up in Canada gradually dissipated. Over the next few decades though relations between the US and Cuba remained strained. Canada began trading with his communist country.
Monday, October 26, 2009
Монголоос англируу орчуулах арга
1 .To read sentence
2. Words to look
3. Activity to distinguish
4. Advantage to distinguish
5. Words all to write
6. For to north read
7. To look conjunction link
8. Divide in half write
9. To hail look
10. To assemble read
11. To look comma
12. Sentence in better to look
13. To find content
14. Complete for things write
15. To look sum up
1 .To read sentence
2. Words to look
3. Activity to distinguish
4. Advantage to distinguish
5. Words all to write
6. For to north read
7. To look conjunction link
8. Divide in half write
9. To hail look
10. To assemble read
11. To look comma
12. Sentence in better to look
13. To find content
14. Complete for things write
15. To look sum up
hi
1. Tell me about yourself. How would you describe yourself character/personality
-My name is Mongontsetseg. I am ninetheen years old. I am a student. Our school information and telecommunication technology. My future careers are telecommunication and network’s engineer. I will finished my school at next year.
2. What are your greatest strengths (weaknesses)
-In my opinion, my greatest strengthas are hardworking, honest, workaholic, short of something, responsible at work and more experience for others. My main strength is I am very young, so I can do all…
3. Where do you see yourself five yours from now? How do you feel adout your future in the profession
-I will go to Mongolian of Telecommunication company. I was this station of company successful for work. I have my self as knowledge many to charge. Future is existing my before.
4. Looking back, what would you do differently in your life?
-I really all differently. My profession is my life of future for gain .I’d like this profession .This profession is my selection.
5. What extra-curricullar activities were you involved in?
-I have been going to the dancing club in my free time. Passing by is very interesting in my free time. I van this time give up myself.
6. What have you learned from participation in extra-cirricular-activities?
-The situation very peaceful, and not to with healthy. I think a dancing for learn we are very something to able patiently, and hardy, friendly. Dancing is easy peaceful.
7. Describe your ideal company, position and job. How do you think you can develop the organization?
-I think Mongolian of Telecommunication company. They are coming of long for working and long historical. Operation into server is demonstrated high-quality and reliable at user.
8. What and in what ways do you think you can make s contribution to our organization?
-Another of responsible to apply at working. Gave me assignment I will better to carry out. Ear have to softly.
9. What makes a job enjoyable for you? What two or three things would be most important to you in your job.
10. Can you work under pressure?
-I will do my work patiently . I will he asked why he did it. If a impossible to go out work.
11. How important is communication and interaction with others on your job?
-I can cultured when communicate others. In my opinion the communication is vey important thing.
12. Do you prefer to work by yourself or with others?
-I like for group work. Of myself request many public to take out many times at work.
13. What are your long-range goals and objectives?
-My long-range goals are I will learn away in foreign country, I will good career and I am going to entreid at anyone foriegn company.
14. . What are your short-range goals and objectives
-My short-range goals are I will graduated university, I am going to learn more better English and I am going to learn Japan language.
15. How do you plan to achieve your career goals?
-I work away my job and I will become international workman. Then I will be interact with foreign big group. After all I will interworking in foreign company.
16. What do you think you gained by working in your last job (studying in your school )?What were you responsible for? What your job involve.
-I graduated my school after by studied in magister. Now, I had not worked. For I come to your company.
17.Why do you want to work for this company?
- I like your company’s operation very much. Good infrastructure.
18. What type of position do you think you suited for? How would you describe position we have to offer?
-I want do changes in my life. The anyone change is very important in my this life if I can do change in this life at the time I will be very happy. However now I don’t know do any change, maybe I’m need entried at your company.
19. What aspects of the position are you most interested in? How long do you think you would stay with us?
-I am prefer to work with others because I think I’m very communication woman so it is easy for me.
20. What salary would you expect for this position?
-I was read a your advertisement enjoyable for me. It was interesting job. The your organization near at my home and must comportable environment.
-My name is Mongontsetseg. I am ninetheen years old. I am a student. Our school information and telecommunication technology. My future careers are telecommunication and network’s engineer. I will finished my school at next year.
2. What are your greatest strengths (weaknesses)
-In my opinion, my greatest strengthas are hardworking, honest, workaholic, short of something, responsible at work and more experience for others. My main strength is I am very young, so I can do all…
3. Where do you see yourself five yours from now? How do you feel adout your future in the profession
-I will go to Mongolian of Telecommunication company. I was this station of company successful for work. I have my self as knowledge many to charge. Future is existing my before.
4. Looking back, what would you do differently in your life?
-I really all differently. My profession is my life of future for gain .I’d like this profession .This profession is my selection.
5. What extra-curricullar activities were you involved in?
-I have been going to the dancing club in my free time. Passing by is very interesting in my free time. I van this time give up myself.
6. What have you learned from participation in extra-cirricular-activities?
-The situation very peaceful, and not to with healthy. I think a dancing for learn we are very something to able patiently, and hardy, friendly. Dancing is easy peaceful.
7. Describe your ideal company, position and job. How do you think you can develop the organization?
-I think Mongolian of Telecommunication company. They are coming of long for working and long historical. Operation into server is demonstrated high-quality and reliable at user.
8. What and in what ways do you think you can make s contribution to our organization?
-Another of responsible to apply at working. Gave me assignment I will better to carry out. Ear have to softly.
9. What makes a job enjoyable for you? What two or three things would be most important to you in your job.
10. Can you work under pressure?
-I will do my work patiently . I will he asked why he did it. If a impossible to go out work.
11. How important is communication and interaction with others on your job?
-I can cultured when communicate others. In my opinion the communication is vey important thing.
12. Do you prefer to work by yourself or with others?
-I like for group work. Of myself request many public to take out many times at work.
13. What are your long-range goals and objectives?
-My long-range goals are I will learn away in foreign country, I will good career and I am going to entreid at anyone foriegn company.
14. . What are your short-range goals and objectives
-My short-range goals are I will graduated university, I am going to learn more better English and I am going to learn Japan language.
15. How do you plan to achieve your career goals?
-I work away my job and I will become international workman. Then I will be interact with foreign big group. After all I will interworking in foreign company.
16. What do you think you gained by working in your last job (studying in your school )?What were you responsible for? What your job involve.
-I graduated my school after by studied in magister. Now, I had not worked. For I come to your company.
17.Why do you want to work for this company?
- I like your company’s operation very much. Good infrastructure.
18. What type of position do you think you suited for? How would you describe position we have to offer?
-I want do changes in my life. The anyone change is very important in my this life if I can do change in this life at the time I will be very happy. However now I don’t know do any change, maybe I’m need entried at your company.
19. What aspects of the position are you most interested in? How long do you think you would stay with us?
-I am prefer to work with others because I think I’m very communication woman so it is easy for me.
20. What salary would you expect for this position?
-I was read a your advertisement enjoyable for me. It was interesting job. The your organization near at my home and must comportable environment.
Sunday, October 18, 2009
Монгол
1.Программ бол өгөгдлийг яаж боловсруулахыг компьютерт хэлж өгдөг зааварчилгаанууд
5.Илгээгч компьютер нь мэдээг тус бүр нь очих компьютерын хаяагтай багцуудад хуваах ба хүлээн авах компьютер нь багчуудыг чуглуулж дараалалд оруулж тохирох хаягруу илгээдэг
Англи
1.The programm is instructions that tells the computer how to processed data
5. The information is divided each of packet that has a receiver computer address by sender computer and packets are assembled to work in to order then send to optimal address
1.Программ бол өгөгдлийг яаж боловсруулахыг компьютерт хэлж өгдөг зааварчилгаанууд
5.Илгээгч компьютер нь мэдээг тус бүр нь очих компьютерын хаяагтай багцуудад хуваах ба хүлээн авах компьютер нь багчуудыг чуглуулж дараалалд оруулж тохирох хаягруу илгээдэг
Англи
1.The programm is instructions that tells the computer how to processed data
5. The information is divided each of packet that has a receiver computer address by sender computer and packets are assembled to work in to order then send to optimal address
Cover letter
Mongontsetseg Sedsuren
University of Telecommunication and Information technology,
15th khoroo, Bayanzurh district,
Ulaanbaatar Mongolia
To: “Unitel” company
I am graduating in May 2009 with a Bachelor of Engineering from University of Telecommunication and Information Technology. I am interested in your company because. I am looking for the opportunity to perform in this capacity. I believe my background and experience will help me be an asset to your company in a very short time.
Some of my skills and knowledge are proven sales experience, ability to work effectively as part of a team, experience in the technology, interpersonal communication skills, strong public speaking skills. My mathematical skills are excellent and I am very conscientious about meeting deadlines and completing tasks unsupervised. If given the opportunity to accomplish an assignment, I can develop a plan that will meet the needs of the project.
I am very interested in becoming a part of this project after reading your company brochure and an article in the Engineering Journal about your company’s involvement in building a new mall in the area. I can be reached at the address and phone number below. I’ll be calling your office within ten days to inquire on the status of my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Mongontsetseg Sedsuren
Mongontsetseg Sedsuren
University of Telecommunication and Information technology,
15th khoroo, Bayanzurh district,
Ulaanbaatar Mongolia
To: “Unitel” company
I am graduating in May 2009 with a Bachelor of Engineering from University of Telecommunication and Information Technology. I am interested in your company because. I am looking for the opportunity to perform in this capacity. I believe my background and experience will help me be an asset to your company in a very short time.
Some of my skills and knowledge are proven sales experience, ability to work effectively as part of a team, experience in the technology, interpersonal communication skills, strong public speaking skills. My mathematical skills are excellent and I am very conscientious about meeting deadlines and completing tasks unsupervised. If given the opportunity to accomplish an assignment, I can develop a plan that will meet the needs of the project.
I am very interested in becoming a part of this project after reading your company brochure and an article in the Engineering Journal about your company’s involvement in building a new mall in the area. I can be reached at the address and phone number below. I’ll be calling your office within ten days to inquire on the status of my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Mongontsetseg Sedsuren
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